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Help me with my CV
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zaed_salah
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:55 am    Post subject: Help me with my CV Reply with quote

Hi, very one, could you please help me to improve my CV and check it if there are ar any errors?.



Objective
Experienced telecommunication engineer looking for new and challenging opportunities in telecommunication field which allows career growth.
Personal Profile
Simple person, easy to deal with, a competent working in a team as I was a scout from early age, very ambitious, motivated. I strongly believe in my potential, my ability; and hard worker as long as interesting and challenging. I am open minded to other cultures and people from different places, accept and respect other opinions and believes, love to learn more foreign languages.
Full Name: Salah Salim Abdusalam Zaied.
Place & date of birth: Brgn, Libya. 24 March 1975.
Marital Status: Single.
Nationality: Libyan.
Work Experience
Telecommunication and control engineer:
Great Man-Made River Authority (GMMRA) Oct 1999 - Jan 2001 Libya
Hasouna Jeffara System /Phase II.
Control and monitor of water well fields of North East Jabal Hasouna (NEJH) south and (NEJH) north, 90 wells via SCADA system, and 78 manually, managing water supply to north area.
Carry out the maintenance work of all associated electronic apparatus; RTU’s (Remote Terminal Units) DCU’s (Data Concentrator Units), PLC’s and modems for well field control system.

Telecommunication Engineer:
Brown & Root North Africa (Secondment) Feb 2001- Aug2001 Libya

Telecommunication supervisor engineer for the contract between GMMRA and SIEMENS AG Company (Contract No.216) relating to lying and installing of more than 1000KM of optical fiber cable with associated equipment include SMA1k, SMA1/4, FMX, and power supply system in 24th Station and shelter.
Telecommunication Engineer
Great Man-Made River Authority (GMMRA) Sep2001 - Nov2004 Libya
Hasouna Jeffara System Phase II.

Monitoring and managing of the TBBS network via TNMS management system
Telecommunication Supervisor Engineer:
Dong AH Consortium (DAC) Dec2004 - Jun2006 Libya
Seconded to the Korean construction company (Dong Ah) as a member of Joint Operation and Maintenance Team between GMMRA and DAC.
Hasouna Jeffara System Phase II.
Supervising and managing a telecommunication team (3 engineers and 3 technicians) in Hasouna well filed area. That includes planning and arranging daily maintenance work schedule.
Completing of remaining work o f contract (202) between DAC and GMMRA, this consist of; SAT for well field copper cable system, maintaining and updating PLC software and firmware of 400 wellhead and their DC power supply, install new batteries, and maintain rectifiers.


Telecommunication Supervisor Engineer: July2006 - Jan2008 Libya
GMMRA

Telecommunication Engineer: 1thFeb2008- 28Feb2008 Libya
Alcatel Lucent -Milletah Gas
Telecommunication support and maintenance engineer on Alcatel OMniPCX4400 network for Western Libyan Gas Project (WLGP) as a part of the contract between Milletah Gas Company and Alcatel lucent, this include, carry out scheduled hardware and software preventive maintenance for telephone network with 5 nodes using PABX 4730 Management system application , and via mgr costumer management working under Unix environment.
Also, supporting Milletah telecom staff in repairing telephone lines

Education
Bachelor’s degree in Engineering Sciences, department of Electrical & Electronics Engineering
Majoring in Electronics and communications (Overall Grade 68%, B equivalent)
Project work: Design and Implement an optical fiber network l system (Transmitter, receiver, and 10M optical fiber cable)
University of AL-Jabal AL-Gharbi Sep1993- July1998
Engineering Faculty
Jado, Libya.

Training
Microwave transmission, PDH, SDH, WinNT, English language course Tripoli Libya
PCM30, PDH, SDH, SMA1/4, SMA1k, TNMS, FMX/CMX, DCN I and C Training Institute SIEMENS Munich Germany
SDH Radio System.SRT1C Customer Training Center Milan Italy

Additional Skills
Language: Arabic (Mother tongue) English: IELTS overall result 5.5 on 17th Sep2005
A Knowledge of MS office including Word and Excel and can work on all windows platforms, fair knowledge of UNIX.
Excellent with Internet and Email, have the ability to conduct researches and all activities that require the use of the web.
Clean Driven license.
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lexa10881
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 3:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks good, just kind of long. I would evaluate the length and see if there is anything you want to remove. Also, in your introductory part about yourself it is not very punchy even though you use some good describing words to describe yourself. Maybe there is a way to jazz this up?

http://www.cvtips.com/make_your_CV_more_interesting.html
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zaed_salah
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 9:55 am    Post subject: Thanks Reply with quote

Thanks alo:

I knew that the introductory was simple and not too attractive, may be because I am not native English speaker.
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zaed_salah
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2008 10:03 am    Post subject: Work experience Reply with quote

Is't Ok to start work expereience from the first employment , or should it be from last one?
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