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consultant_2_b Newbie

Joined: 16 Jul 2008 Posts: 2 Career Advice: +0/-0

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lexa10881 Expert

Joined: 24 Mar 2007 Posts: 1713 Career Advice: +1/-0 Location: Ohio

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mistro Senior Member

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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:58 am Post subject: |
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Looks like you've made a good start.
Here are a few pointers to help out a little:
1. You put too much space for your achievements and not enough for work. It also looks like some of your achievements could be intertwined in your work experience. Consultants need to have breadth of experience with achievements, not separate.
2. I'd get rid of your 'Modern School' entry all together. You have a 1st degree now making your 'Modern School' irrelevant. That frees up more space for work achievements.
3. Expand more on your work entries. What you achieved, used, did etc. Cover the where, what, why and how.
4. Hone and focus your messaging. Some entries in your CV seem to contradict themselves i.e. you won £4000 but got to level 2? Confusing. Make sure your messaging is clear, targeted and consistent.
Hope that helps. For more please visit CV Clinic |
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consultant_2_b Newbie

Joined: 16 Jul 2008 Posts: 2 Career Advice: +0/-0

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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:00 pm Post subject: |
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Hi,
Thanks for the link. I had however read through most of the general info. available on the site as well as on other sites...so I will really appreciate any specific advice that may available on the resume I have created.,
Thanks again |
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