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please take a look at my CV, feedback very much appreciated!
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grubby23
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:04 pm    Post subject: please take a look at my CV, feedback very much appreciated! Reply with quote

Sorry for the Layout, but it looks better when formatted. Anyway, would be thankful for tips how to rewritte some stuff to make it sound better Wink

Many thanks!

Mr Max Musterman

Department of Computer Science, Nationality: Austrian
2.09 XXX, Date of Birth: 05 March 1981
XXX, E-mail: xxx@cs.xxx.ac.uk
XXXTel: +44 (0) 7942 000 000


Education

2/2007-Present University of XXX Department of Computer Science.
PhD in Computer Science, Computer Architecture & Cryptography
Fully funded by EPSRC Doctoral Training Grant.

2003-2005 XXX University of Technology
Master of Science with distinction in Telematics
Major: Security in Information Technology; Minor: Economics

Winter 2004 Master Thesis at University of XXX Department of Computer Science
“Hardware XXX”

1999-2002 XXX University of Technology
Bachelor of Science in Telematics
Bachelor's Project: Instruction Set Extension of the LEON SparcV8 Processor
for Efficient Public-Key Cryptography

Publications

Cryptographic XXX
11th IMA International Conference, Cirencester, UK

Efficient XXX
7th International Workshop on Cryptographic Hardware and Embedded Systems, Edinburgh, UK

Professional Experience

04/2006-01/2007 Software Engineer in the BU Measuring of XXX in Schaan, Liechtenstein. Realising
manufacturing resources for the new distance laser measuring
device in cooperation with XXX in Jena, Germany.

Summer 2005 Practical Training at XXX in Pretoria, South Africa. Programmed
platform independent web interface for existing API using AJAX technology.

Spring 2004 Tutor for Computer Organisation at the Institute XXX in Graz

Skills

Programming Languages C/C++, SystemC, VHDL, LISA, Matlab
Applications and Tools Xilinx ISE/EDK, Mentor Modelsim, ChipScope Pro, SimpleScalar CoWare Processor Designer
Operating Systems Unix[Linux], Windows[NT/XP/9x/DOS]
Other Fluent in English and German. Good working knowledge French.
Driver's licence(car)


References are available on request
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lexa10881
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Joined: 24 Mar 2007
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Location: Ohio

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 6:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't really have any content suggestions for you. I will tell you that I am quite impressed with your achievements for your age. I am the same age and only have a bachelor's degree. Now I am quite jealous Very Happy

If you really want to make some changes to your CV, consult this article;

http://www.cvtips.com/improve_CV.html

But I think you are already there. Looks great to me!
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grubby23
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 31, 2008 3:28 pm    Post subject: thanks for the nice feedback ;) Reply with quote

Thanks for the feedback, any comments about spelling, grammer or something like that? I am not native so that would be helpful Very Happy

The other thing, is it called master thesis or masters thesis

Many thanks,
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C_Vaughan
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Location: Texas

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I think expounding on your work experience would be helpful. I'm sure you did more there than simply a sentence worth of work.

~C. Vaughan
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tcvs
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Joined: 10 Feb 2008
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Location: Uk

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If this is to be used in the UK, you should consider compiling a brief introduction (profile) at the top of your CV to showcase your main selling points - think of your CV as your personal sales tool.

Also, as per the previous post, you should try and expand slightly on your employment section - this is an ideal way of demonstrating transferable skills!
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